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• Our behaviour is controlled by several fears, which costantly partecipate to build up the masks we wear everyday.
• Our behaviour is controlled by several kinds of fear, which constantly serve to create the masks we wear every day.
• "Every day" as two words is an adverb, but "everyday" as one word is an adjective.
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• Our behaviour is controlled by several fears, which costantly partecipate to build up the masks we wear everyday.
• First of all there is the fear of what other people think about ourselves.
• First of all there is the fear of what other people think about us.
• "Ourselves" is reflexive, which means the person who does the action also receives the action: We saw ourselves in the mirror.
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• Our behaviour is controlled by several fears, which costantly partecipate to build up the masks we wear everyday.
• I used the word which I memorized in the sentences.
• I used the word which I memorized in the sentences.
• It would probably sound better to say "I used words I just learned in these sentences"
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• Could you please check these sentences?
• Nothing especial happened then: crisis, lots of mob – typical situation in Russia.
• Nothing special has happened that year, except for maybe a political crisis in Russia.
• The word 'mob' by itself usually tends to evoke the idea of the Maffia. Did you mean demonstrators or protesters? Mobs of protesters marched through the park.
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• Since I made such a boastful statement (mastering English), I feel a little bit guilty for not writing anything for such a long time.
• Now I realize that it would be convenient for me to partially quote other's posts and translate them into English, because not so many things happn in my pretty ordinary daily life.
• Now I realize that it would be more convenient for me to partially quote other's' posts and translate them into English, because not so many there aren't so many things that happen in my pretty ordinary daily life.
• 1. Bear in mind the possessive S doesn't work the same with some plurals One other = The other's posts several others = The others' posts Any word with S at the end already must put the apostrophe at the end without an additional S. (It's accepted that you could put others's, but it looks messy when you have several in a row like in boss's) 2. Just a tip, if you want your sentence to sound more casual, you can say: "There's not so much stuff happening in my..." "There's not so much going on in my..." 'Things' is fine, but it's a little generic in comparison. :)
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• "Perhaps the best way to find out something to write"
• Eating some food that people bring, drinking alcohol, and chatting.
• Eating some foods that people bring, drinking alcohol, and chatting.
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• About The Party Style; Dance or Karaoke
• I have ever attended some parties in Canada and European countries.
• I have ever attended some parties in Canada and European countries.
• perhaps often in place of ever
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• About The Party Style; Dance or Karaoke
• After eating, drinking and chatting until you are filled with, you will start dancing with the music which is sometimes slow and sometimes upbeat.
• After eating, drinking and chatting until you are contented filled with, you will start dancing with the music which is sometimes slow and sometimes upbeat.
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• About The Party Style; Dance or Karaoke
• On the other hand, Japanese party is a tad different from the western style.
• On the other hand, Japanese partiesy is are a tad different from the western onesstyle.
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• About The Party Style; Dance or Karaoke
• After eating, we will move to another spot, that is Karaoke!!
• After eating, we go on will move to another spot, that is Karaoke!!
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• About The Party Style; Dance or Karaoke