High school students can choose the class
Jan 09th 2011 12:01
In universities, we can choose the class that we want to listen. However, in high schools, we can't choose the class, so does middle, and elementry schools. By the way, some people claim that high school students can choose the class, but the other people disagree about that. Today, I am going to write an essay about this.
First of all, I think high school students should not choose the class that they want. Here are the reasons. First, it has economical problems. As you know, universities are very big, so they can include many kinds of classes. However, high schools, they are much smaller than universities, thus they have to make their schools more bigger than before. And if we want to make high schools bigger, we have to build more constructure and it will take a lot of money. Also, we haver to hire more teachers. It will take a lot of money, either.
Next, they have to study basic things that we have to do. If we choose the class, we can choose for free. Therefore, we don't need to study kind of basis like math, English, etc. There must be trouble if they study sports, music instead of these. And then, it could be very hard to go to the university because we have to take a test about math and English. However, if we don't study about this, of course it could be very hard.
In conclusion, high school students should not choose the class because it has economical problems and they could not study although we have to do.
First of all, I think high school students should not choose the class that they want. Here are the reasons. First, it has economical problems. As you know, universities are very big, so they can include many kinds of classes. However, high schools, they are much smaller than universities, thus they have to make their schools more bigger than before. And if we want to make high schools bigger, we have to build more constructure and it will take a lot of money. Also, we haver to hire more teachers. It will take a lot of money, either.
Next, they have to study basic things that we have to do. If we choose the class, we can choose for free. Therefore, we don't need to study kind of basis like math, English, etc. There must be trouble if they study sports, music instead of these. And then, it could be very hard to go to the university because we have to take a test about math and English. However, if we don't study about this, of course it could be very hard.
In conclusion, high school students should not choose the class because it has economical problems and they could not study although we have to do.
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High school students can choose their classes
In universities, we can choose what classes we want to take.
However, in high schools, we can't choose our classes, same as middle, and elementary schools.
By the way, some people claim that high school students should be allowed to choose their classes, but other people disagree about that. [AWK]
Today, I am going to write an essay on this matter.
First of all, high school students should not choose what classes they take.
Here are the reasons. [See Footnote 1]
First, there are many financial problems.
As you know, universities are very big, so they can include a variety of classes.
However, high schools, which are much smaller than universities, would have to make their schools bigger to accommodate the new classes.
If we want to make high schools bigger, we have to build upon existing buildings which takes a lot of money. [See Footnote 2]
Also, we would have to hire more teachers.
That too takes a lot of money.
Next, they have to study basic things that we have already studied.
If we choose the class, we can choose for free.
College students don't need to study basics like math, English, etc. (See Footnote 3)
It would be troublesome if they studied sports and music instead of these necessities.
Then, it would become very hard to go to college because we have to take tests on Math and English.
However, if we don't study about this, of course it could be very hard.
In conclusion, high school students should not choose their classes because of financial issues, and they could not study what we have to study.
Footnote 1: Just saying "Here are the reasons" is a bit too direct and also extremely short, your topic sentence (first sentence in a paragraph) should tell people your reasons since it is a persuasive essay.
Footnote 2: Never start a sentence with AND, in formal writing the word AND is never ever used to start a sentence. If you see it in a book, that's because its used for stylistic effect.
Footnote 3: Don't use pronouns like, I, we, us, they, or them. Avoid these as much as is possible. Him and her may be more acceptable, but it just kinda varies per the situation.
Footnote 4: In a persuasive essay, you are writing about what your opinion is so saying things like "I think..." is redundant (unnecessarily repetitive).
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As for students choosing their classes, it can be done while avoiding the issues you express. In the US what happens is students are required to have taken atleast X amount of core (English, Math, Science, etc.) and X amount of other classes. We get class list with all the different classes we can choose from and some are labeled as core classes and some labeled as other. Overall we can choose the specifics of the class, but we cannot choose to not take classes like English and etc.
High school students shouldn't choose the class (The word should be "shouldn't" because you are against high school students choosing their own classes!)
In universities, we can choose the class that we want to listen attend.
However, in high schools, we can't choose the classes. That also includes so does middle, and elementary schools.
By the way, some people had claimed that high school students can choose their own classes, but the other people disagreed about that.
First of all, I think high school students should not be able to choose the classes that they want.
Here are the reasons:
However, in high schools, they are much smaller than universities, thus they have to make their schools more bigger than before.
And if we want to make high schools bigger, we have to build more construction and it will waste take a lot of money.
Also, we haver to hire more teachers.
It will take spend a lot of money, either way.
Next, they have to study the basic things that we have to do.
If we choose the class, we can choose it for free.
Therefore, we don't need to study kind of the basics like math, English, etc.
There must be trouble if they study sports and music instead of these.
However, if we don't study about this those subjects, of course it could be very hard.
In conclusion, high school students should not choose the class because it has there would be economical problems and they could not study although as much as we have to do.