Um.. First english diary in my life.
Nov 18th 2009 01:32
This is my first english diary in my entire life.
This site must be interesting....
If there is someone who want to be my friend,
I always welcome all of you.
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This site must be interesting....
If there is someone who want to be my friend,
I always welcome all of you.
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This is the first english diary I've written in my life. (Wording suggestion)
If there is someone who wants to be my friend,
Your correction made my akward sentence natural.
and I am ashamed that I made a mistake in a simple sentence like 2nd line.
Thanks again.