I went to swim at an indoor pool

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I feel short of exercise recently because my work was busy this month. So I went to swim at an indoor pool named "Pururu" in a next city. The indoor pool is very well-appointed. It is 25m in length and has 6 lanes. I enjoyed swimming and swam about 500m. There were 20 simmers or less in the pool. I thought that more simmers came here and enjoy swimming. And an entrance fee is 600yen. I think that the cost is reasonable.
Dec 18th 2011 18:09 Bendono

  • I feel short of exercise recently because my work was busy this month.
  • I feel short of exercise lately because work was busy this month.

 

  • So I went to swim at an indoor pool named "Pururu" in a next city.
  • So I went to swim at an indoor pool named "Pururu" in the next city.

 

  • The indoor pool is very well-appointed.
  • The indoor pool is very well-appointed. (well-appointed:意味不明)

 

  • I enjoyed swimming and swam about 500m.
  • I enjoy swimming and swam about 500m.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • There were 20 simmers or less in the pool.
  • There were 20 swimmers or less in the pool.

 

  • And an entrance fee is 600yen.
  • The entrance fee is 600 yen.

1 people think this correction is good.  
Dec 19th 2011 08:04 ta-chan
Thank you for your correction.
Dec 19th 2011 11:37 Jcaltex

  • I feel short of exercise recently because my work was busy this month.
  • I have not exercised much recently because my work was busy this month.

 

  • So I went to swim at an indoor pool named "Pururu" in a next city.
  • So, I went to swim at an indoor pool named "Pururu" in a nearby city.

 

  • The indoor pool is very well-appointed.
  • The indoor pool is very well-maintained.

 

  • There were 20 simmers or less in the pool.
  • There were about 20 swimmers in the pool.

 

  • I thought that more simmers came here and enjoy swimming.
  • I thought that more swimmers would be here to enjoy swimming.

 
Sounds neat. I prefer indoor pools to outdoor pools.
Dec 19th 2011 17:07 ta-chan
Thank you for your correction.
Dec 19th 2011 14:02 Evelyn

Good corrections. I have nothing to add.

:) Swimming is great exercise.

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