Mao Asada won the final

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of ta-chan's latest journal entries Dec 26th 2011 17:27

Mao Asada won the final of the figure skating yesterday. I'm a fan of her, so I was glad that she won the final. Before a competition of the figure skating, I worried about her condition. Because she lost her mother two weeks ago. However her performance was very nice and didn't feel about her sadness. I thought that she became very tough and grew up greatly mature. I'm looking forward to her the skating. I wish that she will take part in the Winter Olympic games. And I want to get the gold medal.
Dec 26th 2011 17:57 Brendan7777

  • I'm looking forward to her the skating.
  • I'm looking forward to her the skating again.

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  • I wish that she will take part in the Winter Olympic games.
  • I hope / pray that she will take part in the Winter Olympic games.

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  • And I want to get the gold medal.
  • And I want her to get the gold medal.

 
Dec 26th 2011 18:01 ta-chan
Thank you for your correction(^^)
Dec 26th 2011 18:06 Brendan7777
You are welcome. Have a look at my whale and dolphin entry if you have time.
Dec 27th 2011 09:28 Jcaltex

  • Mao Asada won the final of the figure skating yesterday.
  • Mao Asada won the figure skating final yesterday.

 

  • Before a competition of the figure skating, I worried about her condition.
  • Before the figure skating competition, I was worried about her condition because she lost her mother two weeks ago.

 

  • Because she lost her mother two weeks ago.
  • Because she lost her mother two weeks ago.

 

  • However her performance was very nice and didn't feel about her sadness.
  • However, her performance was very nice and didn't notice her sadness.

 

  • I thought that she became very tough and grew up greatly mature.
  • I thought that she looked very tough and showed great maturity.

 

  • And I want to get the gold medal.
  • I also hope that she wins the gold medal.

 
I'm glad that she won. I hope that her success continues.
Dec 27th 2011 13:42 ta-chan
Thank you for your correction.
Dec 28th 2011 21:51 jzzop

  • However her performance was very nice and didn't feel about her sadness.
  • However her performance was very nice and her sadness was not evident.

 
ta-chan san, thank you for your entry. My own father took ill and I've not had a chance to keep up with such news! We'll be cheering for her
Dec 29th 2011 07:49 ta-chan
Thank you for your correction. I cheer for har, too.
Dec 31st 2011 15:33 jzzop
ta-chan san, you're most welcome. "Thanks points", arigatou.

"I cheer for her, too."

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