I went to have a checkup

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I went to the Shimada community hospital to have a regular checkup this morning. Most difficult examination was a gastrocamera. It was very difficult that a fiberscope got down into the throat and I felt bad feeling. However after the examination, a doctor said that my stomach is clear and healthy. I feel temporarily relieved.

By the way, it snowed this morning. My living place is warm and it rarely snows in the winter. Therefore when it snows, almost all people are confused with the snow. This picture is of a flower covered the snow in my garden.
Jan 17th 2012 17:39 Quabazaa

  • Most difficult examination was a gastrocamera.
  • The most difficult examination was a gastrocamera. (Usually we say "endoscopy")

 

  • It was very difficult that a fiberscope got down into the throat and I felt bad feeling.
  • It was very difficult for the fiberscope to get down into the throat and it was very uncomfortable.

 

  • However after the examination, a doctor said that my stomach is clear and healthy.
  • However after the examination, the doctor said that my stomach is clear and healthy.

 

  • I feel temporarily relieved.
  • I feel temporarily relieved. (Sounds more natural: I am relieved)

 

  • My living place is warm and it rarely snows in the winter.
  • My area is warm and it rarely snows in the winter.

 

  • Therefore when it snows, almost all people are confused with the snow.
  • Therefore when it snows, almost everyone is confused by the snow. (Perhaps "surprised by the snow" would sound more natural.)

 

  • This picture is of a flower covered the snow in my garden.
  • This picture is of a snow-covered flower in my garden.

 
I am sorry you had to have the examination but I'm glad it turned out well! I hope you stay healthy! :)

The snow sounds so beautiful, thanks for the photo.
Jan 18th 2012 10:36 ta-chan
Thank you for your correction.
Jan 17th 2012 21:03 Simo

I hope you are ok with all these examinations.
but you have snow today, very lucky.
Jan 18th 2012 10:36 ta-chan
Thanks(^^)
Jan 18th 2012 15:11 Simo
^^'

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