A heavily snow in Sea of Japan side

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There was a heavily snow in Sea of Japan side from last week. A snowfall in Sea of Japan side was recorded until now. The most snowfall was about 3m or more. This year's snowfall was about twice beside the usual year. Therefore a lot of snowing accidents happened and about 60 peoples passed away. According to the weather forecast, the heavily snow continue until this weekend.
Feb 05th 2012 17:32 tauhotdog

  • A heavily snow in Sea of Japan side
  • A heavily snow in on the Sea of Japan side

 

  • There was a heavily snow in Sea of Japan side from last week.
  • There was a heavily snow in heavy snowfall on the Sea of Japan side from last week. (or you can say, "It snowed heavily on the Sea of Japan side last week")

 

  • A snowfall in Sea of Japan side was recorded until now.
  • A snowfall in Sea of Japan side was recorded until now. (not sure what you are trying to say here)

 

  • The most snowfall was about 3m or more.
  • The most snowfall was about 3m or more.

 

  • This year's snowfall was about twice beside the usual year.
  • This year's snowfall was about twice beside the usual year annual amount.

 

  • Therefore a lot of snowing accidents happened and about 60 peoples passed away.
  • Therefore a lot of snowing accidents happened and about 60 peoples passed away. ("Therefore" is ok, you can also use "As a result".)

 

  • According to the weather forecast, the heavily snow continue until this weekend.
  • According to the weather forecast, the heavily heavy snow will continue until this weekend.

 
I hope the weather gets better there!
Feb 06th 2012 08:11 ta-chan
Thank you for your correction.
Feb 05th 2012 18:04 EKPG

  • A heavily snow in Sea of Japan side
  • Heavy snow in the Sea of Japan

 

  • There was a heavily snow in Sea of Japan side from last week.
  • Last week, there was a heavy snow storm in the Sea of Japan

 

  • A snowfall in Sea of Japan side was recorded until now.
  • Reports of the snowfall, in the Sea of Japan, is still being recorded, now.

 

  • The most snowfall was about 3m or more.
  • Snowfall reached some 3m or more in the hardest hit areas.

 

  • This year's snowfall was about twice beside the usual year.
  • This year's snowfall measured twice as high as it normally had.

 

  • Therefore a lot of snowing accidents happened and about 60 peoples passed away.
  • Therefore a lot of snowing accidents happened and about 60 peoples passed away. *or* Lots of accidents were reported and around 60 fatalities as well

 

  • According to the weather forecast, the heavily snow continue until this weekend.
  • According to the weather forecast, the heavy snow will continue (to fall) till this weekend.

 
Just writing some other options of saying what I think you are talkin about...but if it isn't well I am sorry. Keep up the great work.
Feb 06th 2012 08:11 ta-chan
Thank you for your correction.

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