Rose Bud

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As the temperature has risen high, there are some rose buds in my garden.
気温が上がるにしたがって、庭のバラにつぼみがつき始めた。

In this winter, I pruned down roses in my garden.
この冬、庭のバラの剪定をした。

Then I worried that roses might grow up well.
その時は、うまく育ってくれるか心配だった。

But I relieved that many roses had buds.
でも、たくさんのつぼみがついて安心した。

I'm looking forward to blooming many beautiful roses.
たくさんのきれいなバラが咲くのを楽しみにしている。
Apr 21st 2010 14:20 Marina

  • As the temperature has risen high, there are some rose buds in my garden.
  • As the temperature has risen high, there are some rose buds in my garden.

 

  • In this winter, I pruned down roses in my garden.
  • This winter, I pruned down the roses in my garden.

 

  • Then I worried that roses might grow up well.
  • Then I worried that those roses might not grow up well.

 

  • But I relieved that many roses had buds.
  • So I am relieved that many roses had buds.

 

  • I'm looking forward to blooming many beautiful roses.
  • I'm looking forward to the blooming of many beautiful roses.

 
This is a good entry. :)
Apr 21st 2010 15:45 ta-chan

Hello Marina

Thank you for your correction and comment.
Roses are a comfort to my mind.
Apr 21st 2010 16:49 wilsoncb

  • In this winter, I pruned down roses in my garden.
  • This winter, I pruned the roses in my garden.

 

  • Then I worried that roses might grow up well.
  • (Then) I worried that roses might not grow up well. ["Then" is okay, but it's a little more natural without it, I think.]

 

  • But I relieved that many roses had buds.
  • But I relieved that many roses have buds.

 

  • I'm looking forward to blooming many beautiful roses.
  • I'm looking forward to the blooming of many beautiful roses.

 
Ahh, I love gardening, and especially roses! Please show us some pictures of them when they bloom! :D
Apr 21st 2010 17:08 ta-chan

Hello wilsoncb

Thank you for your correction and comment.
When roses bloom, I'm gonna write a diary entry and upload the photo of roses.
Apr 21st 2010 20:35 keiko

Twitterのお写真のバラが素敵でした!
ほんとに、お庭の手入れが行きとどいてるんでしょうね(^^ゞ
Apr 22nd 2010 07:43 ta-chan

keikoさん おはよう
手入れというか、きれいな花を咲かせてあげたいと
思っているので・・・ 

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