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Mountain Guides

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of ta-chan's latest journal entries Aug 02nd 2010 11:53

Two peoples who worked for the Nihon TV died in a mountain. They climbed to report an accident of a helicopter. When they had the accident, they climbed without a mountain guide.

By the way, I always dive with a diving guide. It is dangerous in the sea. If I'll get into a panic in the sea, it is a only guide who are able to help me. Luckily I haven't been in an accident in the sea. However I'll dive with a guide from now on.

This photo is of that I took in Okinawa several years ago.
Aug 02nd 2010 12:02 gutenbookworm

  • Two peoples who worked for the Nihon TV died in a mountain.
  • Two peoples who worked for the Nihon TV died on a mountain.
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  • They climbed to report an accident of a helicopter.
  • They climbed up to report onanthe accident of a helicopter.
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  • When they had the accident, they climbed without a mountain guide.
  • When they had the accident, they climbed without a mountain guide.They had climbed without a mountain guide, when they had the accident.
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  • If I'll get into a panic in the sea, it is a only guide who are able to help me.
  • If I'll get into a panic in the sea, it is a only the guide who arewould be able to help me.
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  • This photo is of that I took in Okinawa several years ago.
  • This photo is ofone that I took in Okinawa several years ago.
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Aug 02nd 2010 12:13 ta-chan

Hello gutenbookworm

Thank you for your correction.
Aug 02nd 2010 12:14 popolinlin

  • Two peoples who worked for the Nihon TV died in a mountain.
  • Two peoples who worked for the Nihon TV died on a mountain.
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  • When they had the accident, they climbed without a mountain guide.
  • When the reporters had the accident, they climbed without a mountain guide.
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  • If I'll get into a panic in the sea, it is a only guide who are able to help me.
  • If I'll get into a panic in the sea, it is a only the guide who are would be able to help me.
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  • However I'll dive with a guide from now on.
  • However I'll continue to dive with a guide from now on.
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Aug 02nd 2010 15:48 ta-chan

Hello popolinlin

Thank you for your correction.
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