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Shizuoka Cola included green tea

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I found an article about the Shizuoka Cola in a local newspaper several day ago. It include green tea. I was interested in what taste is it. And I thought that I wanted to drink it. I found it a nearby convenience store. Its price was 170yen, and I thought that it was a little expensive. But I bought it.

After I backed home, I drank it with a great interest. But its taste was a little sweet normal cola. I couldn't feel a taste of green tea. It was a little regrettable. This picture is of a bottle of the Shizuoka Cola.
Aug 12th 2010 10:17 nosa_manuel

  • Shizuoka Cola included green tea
  • Shizuoka Cola includes green tea
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  • I found an article about the Shizuoka Cola in a local newspaper several day ago.
  • I found an article about the Shizuoka Cola in a local newspaper several day ago.
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  • It include green tea.
  • It includes green tea.
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  • I was interested in what taste is it.
  • I was interested in what taste is it tastes like.
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  • I found it a nearby convenience store.
  • I found it a at nearby convenience store.
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  • Its price was 170yen, and I thought that it was a little expensive.
  • Its price was 170 yen, and I thought that it was a little expensive.
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  • After I backed home, I drank it with a great interest.
  • After I backed returned home, I drank it with a great interest.<meta charset="utf-8">After I backed got back home, I drank it with a great interest.
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  • But its taste was a little sweet normal cola.
  • But its taste was a little sweeter than normal cola.
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  • I couldn't feel a taste of green tea.
  • I couldn't feel a taste the green tea.
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  • This picture is of a bottle of the Shizuoka Cola.
  • This picture is of a bottle of the Shizuoka Cola.
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Aug 12th 2010 10:27

  • I found an article about the Shizuoka Cola in a local newspaper several day ago.
  • I found an article about the Shizuoka Cola in a local newspaper several days ago.
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  • It include green tea.
  • It included green tea.
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  • I was interested in what taste is it.
  • I was interested in what it tasted like and I thought that I wanted to drink it.I combined the two sentences because starting a sentence with 'and' is not appropriate in formal writing.
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  • And I thought that I wanted to drink it.
  • And I thought that I wanted to drink it.See above.
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  • Its price was 170yen, and I thought that it was a little expensive.
  • It cost 170yen. I thought that it was a little expensive, but I bought it.Again, I separated and combined the two sentences because starting a sentence with 'but' is not appropriate for formal writing.
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  • But I bought it.
  • But I bought it.See above.
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  • After I backed home, I drank it with a great interest.
  • After I went back home, I drank it with a great interest.
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  • But its taste was a little sweet normal cola.
  • But Its taste was a little sweeter than normal cola.
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  • I couldn't feel a taste of green tea.
  • I couldn't feel a taste of the green tea.
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Great job! Just a few corrections!
Aug 12th 2010 14:14 ta-chan

Hello nosa_manuel
Hello itsemiloveyou

Thank you for your correction. It was yuummy, a little sweet though ww.
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