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Made grape jam

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I wrote a previous diary entry that I harvested grapes in my garden. And I made grape jam.

First I washed them and took off Grain of grape from bunches. I put in it a blender and mixed. I add sugar to it and I put it in the microwave oven and heated it.

I tasted it so there were many seeds in it. And I strained it to use a colander. When it got cold, I put it in a bottle. I ate it, and it was pretty sweat.
Aug 20th 2010 13:41 Sigmonster

  • I wrote a previous diary entry that I harvested grapes in my garden.
  • I wrote in a previous diary entry that I harvested grapes in my garden.
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  • First I washed them and took off Grain of grape from bunches.
  • **What exactly is "grain" in this sentence? Are you talking about the seeds? Or maybe stems?
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  • I put in it a blender and mixed.
  • I put them in it a blender and mixed.
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  • I add sugar to it and I put it in the microwave oven and heated it.
  • I added sugar to it and I put it in the microwave oven and heated it.
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  • I tasted it so there were many seeds in it.
  • I tasted it and so there were so many seeds in it.
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  • And I strained it to use a colander.
  • And So I strained it to use using a colander strainer.*"Colander" is technically correct but we almost never use that word. "Strainer" is more natural.*
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  • I ate it, and it was pretty sweat.
  • I ate it, and it was pretty sweat sweet.
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Your English is very good! Keep up the good work :D
Aug 20th 2010 14:36 Jcaltex

  • And I made grape jam.
  • And I made grape jam.
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  • First I washed them and took off Grain of grape from bunches.
  • First I washed them and removed the grapes from their stems.
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  • I add sugar to it and I put it in the microwave oven and heated it.
  • I add sugar to the mix and I put it in the microwave oven and heated it.
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That's so cool. I may give that a try in the future. Good job on your english.
Aug 20th 2010 17:03 ta-chan

Hello Sigmonster
Hello Jcaltex

Thank you for your correction and comments.
I eat bread and grape jam every morning. very yummy.
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