Workshop

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Workshop

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Sep 06th 2010 12:35

I went to take part in a workshop in Shizuoka city last Saturday. This workshop was to make the Suruga Castle made by cardboard boxes. I had taken part in the workshop for the first time. It was introduced from twitter's friend.

Since I took part in it for the first time, I worried how to make a castle. But teachers taught me how to make it.

This pictures is the castle that we made from the cardboard boxes. It seems a little strange, but I was very interesting to make it.

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Sep 06th 2010 12:39 Maru

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I went to take part in a workshop in Shizuoka city last Saturday.
I went to take part in a workshop in Shizuoka city last Saturday.

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This workshop was to make the Suruga Castle made by cardboard boxes.
This workshop was to make the Suruga Castle using cardboard boxes.

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It was introduced from twitter's friend.
It was introduced to me by a friend on twitter.

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Since I took part in it for the first time, I worried how to make a castle.
Since it was the first time for me, I worried about how a castle was supposed to be made. (There really wasn't anything to correct in the first part of the sentence, but this way flows better.)

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But teachers taught me how to make it.
But the teachers taught me how to make it.

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This pictures is the castle that we made from the cardboard boxes.
This pictures is the castle that we made from the cardboard boxes.

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It seems a little strange, but I was very interesting to make it.
It seems a little strange, but I was very interested in making it. (Or, "it was very interesting to make.")

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That's a nice little project.^^

I'm usually too busy studying or training for lacrosse though!

Sep 06th 2010 18:04 ta-chan

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Hello Maru

Thank you for your correction and comment.

Sep 08th 2010 10:34 Larz0rz

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I had taken part in the workshop for the first time.
This was my first time taking part in the workshop. (Because it was your first time, it sounds strange if you use 'had' because that word implies having prior experience.)

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Since I took part in it for the first time, I worried how to make a castle.
Since it was my first time taking part/there, I was worried about how to make the castle.

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