Put a price for savage monkeys

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Put a price for savage monkeys

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Sep 08th 2010 12:29

Some savage monkeys bit about eighty and more peoples who live in Mishima city since half month ago. Some children was bitten them. The polices and the city servant have been catching them. But they wasn't caught yet.

Therefore the mayor put a price for savage monkeys. If someone corner the savage monkey into a room, he/she will get 200,000yen. I hope that savage monkeys are caught as soon as possible.

This picture is one of savage monkeys. It doesn't seem to attack the peoples as fa as I see this picture.

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Sep 08th 2010 12:34 infractus

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Some savage monkeys bit about eighty and more peoples who live in Mishima city since half month ago.
Some savage monkeys bit about eighty or more people who live in Mishima city since half a month ago.

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Some children was bitten them.
Some children were bitten by them.

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The polices and the city servant have been catching them.
The police and the city servants have been catching them,

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But they wasn't caught yet.
but they weren't caught yet.

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If someone corner the savage monkey into a room, he/she will get 200,000yen.
If someone corners a savage monkey into a room, he/she will get 200,000yen.

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I hope that savage monkeys are caught as soon as possible.
I hope that the savage monkeys are caught as soon as possible.

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This picture is one of savage monkeys.
This picture is one of the savage monkeys.

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It doesn't seem to attack the peoples as fa as I see this picture.
It doesn't seem to attack the people as far as I see this picture.

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For that last sentence, do you mean "It doesn't seem like it would attack people"?

Sep 08th 2010 12:44 Maru

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Put a price for savage monkeys
Put a bounty on the savage monkeys

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Some savage monkeys bit about eighty and more peoples who live in Mishima city since half month ago.
Some savage monkeys have bit about eighty or more residents of Mishima City since half a month ago. (Using "residents" is more natural.)

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Some children was bitten them.
Some children were bit by them.

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The polices and the city servant have been catching them.
The polices and the city servants have been trying to catching them, but they have not been caught yet. (I just put both sentences together.)

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