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A constant in our ever-changing life

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Kyoko's latest journal entries Jan 02nd 2012 11:33

How are you doing, everybody.
Happy new year!

It’s passed one year since last my diary and it’s passed one and half a year since I moved to Kamakura from Kyoto, hehehe.
I have been spending good days seeing beautiful ocean and eating great seafood in Kamakura.

During one and half a year, changes for me are
new friends and co-workers,
a longer distance to the jog from 7 km to 16 km,
my room from six jyo to two bed rooms and kitchen,
salary raised (^^) ,
and ....I, I am not changed so much, ummm.

P.S. A picture is enoshima island and Mt. Fuji which I took from my jogging course. I took a breath when I saw it for the first time.
Jan 02nd 2012 11:45 Kvatch

  • A constant in our ever-changing life
  • A Constant in our Ever-Changing Life

 

  • How are you doing, everybody.
  • How are you doing, everybody?

 

  • It’s passed one year since last my diary and it’s passed one and half a year since I moved to Kamakura from Kyoto, hehehe.
  • One year has passed since my last my diary and one and a half years have passed since I moved to Kamakura from Kyoto, hehehe.

 

  • I have been spending good days seeing beautiful ocean and eating great seafood in Kamakura.
  • I have been spending good days seeing the beautiful ocean and eating great seafood in Kamakura.

 

  • During one and half a year, changes for me are
  • During one and half a years, some changes for me are

 

  • a longer distance to the jog from 7 km to 16 km,
  • a longer distance to the jog from 7 km to 16 km,

 

  • my room from six jyo to two bed rooms and kitchen,
  • my room from six jyo to two bed rooms and a kitchen,

 

  • salary raised (^^) ,
  • my salary increased (^^) ,

 

  • I, I am not changed so much, ummm.
  • I, I have not changed so much, ummm.

 

  • A picture is enoshima island and Mt.
  • This is a picture of Enoshima Island and Mt.

 

  • Fuji which I took from my jogging course.
  • Fuji which I took while on my jogging course.

 

  • I took a breath when I saw it for the first time.
  • I gasped when I saw it for the first time.

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Jan 02nd 2012 11:55 Charmanderlez1983

  • How are you doing, everybody.
  • How’s everyone doing?

 

  • Happy new year!
  • Happy New Year!

 

  • It’s passed one year since last my diary and it’s passed one and half a year since I moved to Kamakura from Kyoto, hehehe.
  • It's been one year since my last diary entry; It has also been a year and a half since I moved to Kamakura from Kyoto, hehehe.

 

  • new friends and co-workers,
  • I've made new friends and co-workers,I've met new friend and co-workers,

 

  • a longer distance to the jog from 7 km to 16 km,
  • increased my jogging distance from 7km to 16km,

 

  • I, I am not changed so much, ummm.
  • I, well, I haven't changed very much, ummm.

 

  • A picture is enoshima island and Mt.
  • The picture is of Enoshima Island and Mt.

 

  • Fuji which I took from my jogging course.
  • Fuji which I took while I was jogging.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • I took a breath when I saw it for the first time.
  • It took my breath away when I first saw it.

1 people think this correction is good.  
Nicely done. The last sentence I wrote what I thought you may have been trying to say.
Jan 03rd 2012 12:44 Kyoko
Thank you for your corrections. In the last sentence, I'd like to say that I was amazed at the breathtaking scenery. ^^
Jan 03rd 2012 12:46 Charmanderlez1983
Oh ok. I would write " I was amazed by the breathtaking scenery"
Jan 02nd 2012 14:19 freshbread3

Wow! What a beautiful view of Mt. Fuji ^_^ thank you for sharing it.

I didn't think I would ever get to read your journals after all the drama you had.

I remember you used to live in a hot attic or something. Then you had to move immediately for your job. It sounds like your living conditions have improved greatly.

I think we will always be ourselves no matter what happens. We are our own constant. ^_^
Jan 02nd 2012 14:36 Kevin

  • my room from six jyo to two bed rooms and kitchen,
  • upgraded my room from six tatami mats to two bedrooms and a kitchen,

 
Happy new year! I've visited Kamakura several times because my good friend lives there. Kamakura is a great place. I'm jealous!
Jan 02nd 2012 19:34 Herm

Happy New Year pal.
Jan 03rd 2012 12:35 deekun

Wow, you have a beautiful jogging course! Happy New Year!
Jan 03rd 2012 17:26 Jon Ryan

wow cool picture! what a great view.

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