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Doll's Grudge (人形の呪い)

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Kyoko's latest journal entries Mar 07th 2010 07:25 doll's festival

The third of March is a girl’s day (Doll Festival) in Japan. We customarily display a set of ornamental dolls (hina-ningyo) representing the Emperor, Empress, attendants, and musicians in traditional court dress on platforms covered with a red carpet until March 3.

I was too busy to display them, so I displayed only two dolls of Emperor and Empress. The reason that I'm obsessed to display is I’ve heard that something wrong may happened for girls (me) if dolls are kept in a closet. Besides, if we continue displaying them after March 3, girls will become the old maid. lol

I’ve not put them back yet due to rainy days for a couple of days so as not to go moldy. I feel their faces look fierce and they are angry day and day. Uhhh, scary. I gotta put them back…
Mar 07th 2010 07:59 chequer

  • I was too busy to display them, so I displayed only two dolls of Emperor and Empress.
  • I was too busy to display them all, so I displayed only two dolls of the Emperor and Empress.
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  • The reason that I'm obsessed to display is I’ve heard that something wrong may happened for girls (me) if dolls are kept in a closet.
  • The reason that I'm obsessed about displaying them is that I’ve heard that something wrong may happened for girls (me) if the dolls are kept in a closet.
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  • Besides, if we continue displaying them after March 3, girls will become the old maid.
  • Besides, if we continue displaying them after March 3, girls will become the old maids.
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  • I’ve not put them back yet due to rainy days for a couple of days so as not to go moldy.
  • I’ve not put them back yet as we have had rainy days for a couple of days and I don't want them to go mouldy.
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  • I feel their faces look fierce and they are angry day and day.
  • I feel their faces look fierce and they are angry all day long.
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面白かったですよ。

雛人形は高いですか。とても美しそうだと思います。
Mar 07th 2010 08:00 Joseph

  • I was too busy to display them, so I displayed only two dolls of Emperor and Empress.
  • I was too busy to display them, so I only displayed two dolls, the Emperor and Empress.
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  • The reason that I'm obsessed to display is I’ve heard that something wrong may happened for girls (me) if dolls are kept in a closet.
  • The reason that I'm obsessed about displaying them is because I’ve heard that something bad might happen for girls (me) if the dolls are kept in the closet.
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  • Besides, if we continue displaying them after March 3, girls will become the old maid.
  • Besides, if we continue displaying them after March 3, we girls will become old maids.
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  • I’ve not put them back yet due to rainy days for a couple of days so as not to go moldy.
  • I haven't put them back yet because it rained for the last couple of days and so they might get moldy.
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  • I feel their faces look fierce and they are angry day and day.
  • I feel as if their faces look fierce and they are getting angrier every day.
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Sounds like the start of a horror movie. =)
Mar 07th 2010 08:01 chequer

A 'grudge' is when you are a little unhappy with someone who has upset you and you resent them.

Perhaps this time you might use the word 'curse' = Doll's Curse or 'The Curse of the Dolls'
Mar 07th 2010 08:06 ラリー

  • Doll's Grudge (人形の呪い)
  • Doll's Curse (人形の呪い)
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  • The third of March is a girl’s day (Doll Festival) in Japan.
  • The third of March is Girl’s Day (Doll Festival) in Japan.
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  • I was too busy to display them, so I displayed only two dolls of Emperor and Empress.
  • I was too busy to display them, so I displayed only two dolls of the Emperor and Empress.
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  • The reason that I'm obsessed to display is I’ve heard that something wrong may happened for girls (me) if dolls are kept in a closet.
  • The reason that I feel obligated to display is that I’ve heard that something wrong may happened to girls (me) if the dolls are kept in the closet.
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  • Besides, if we continue displaying them after March 3, girls will become the old maid.
  • Also, if we continue displaying them after March 3, girls will become the old maids.
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  • I’ve not put them back yet due to rainy days for a couple of days so as not to go moldy.
  • I haven't put them back yet because it's been raining for the last couple of days and I don't want them to get moldy.
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  • I feel their faces look fierce and they are angry day and day.
  • I feel their faces look fierce and they are getting angrier day by day.
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Hi Kyoko,

Thank you for writing this interesting and funny journal!
The pictures are good too.
Mar 07th 2010 08:16 quidam

  • The third of March is a girl’s day (Doll Festival) in Japan.
  • The third of March is Girls' Day (Doll Festival) in Japan.
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  • We customarily display a set of ornamental dolls (hina-ningyo) representing the Emperor, Empress, attendants, and musicians in traditional court dress on platforms covered with a red carpet until March 3.
  • We customarily display a set of ornamental dolls (hina-ningyo) representing the Emperor, Empress, attendants, and musicians in traditional court dress on platforms covered with a red carpet until March 3. (This is fine, but it might sound more natural to divide it into two sentences.)
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  • I was too busy to display them, so I displayed only two dolls of Emperor and Empress.
  • I was too busy to display them all, so I displayed only two dolls, the Emperor and the Empress.
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  • The reason that I'm obsessed to display is I’ve heard that something wrong may happened for girls (me) if dolls are kept in a closet.
  • The reason that why I'm obsessed to with displaying the dolls is that I’ve heard that something wrong bad may happened for to girls (like me) if the dolls are kept in a the closet.
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  • Besides, if we continue displaying them after March 3, girls will become the old maid.
  • Besides Also, if we girls continue to displaying them after March 3, girls they will become the old maids.
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  • I’ve not put them back yet due to rainy days for a couple of days so as not to go moldy.
  • I haven't put them back yet because it's been rainy for the last couple of days, and I don't want them to get moldy.
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  • I feel their faces look fierce and they are angry day and day.
  • I feel that their faces look fierce and that they are angry day and day. [I'm not sure exactly what you are trying to say here - are they angry every day (=angry day and night), or are they getting angrier by the day?]
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Girls' Day sounds very interesting! :)
Mar 07th 2010 17:01 Terry

  • I was too busy to display them, so I displayed only two dolls of Emperor and Empress.
  • I was too busy to display them all so I only displayed two dolls: the Emperor and the Empress
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  • The reason that I'm obsessed to display is I’ve heard that something wrong may happened for girls (me) if dolls are kept in a closet.
  • The reason thatwhy I'm obsessed towith displaying them is that I’ve heard that something wrongbad may happened forto girls like me(me) if the dolls are kept in a closet.
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  • Besides, if we continue displaying them after March 3, girls will become the old maid.
  • Besides, it is said that if wegirls continue displaying them after March 3, girlsthey will become the old maids.
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  • I’ve not put them back yet due to rainy days for a couple of days so as not to go moldy.
  • I’ve notI haven't put them back yet due to rainy daysbecause it has been raining for a couple of days so as not to goand I didn't want them to get moldy.
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  • I feel their faces look fierce and they are angry day and day.
  • I feelTheir faces look fierce and it seems like they are getting angrier every day. angry day and day.
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Good job! I just corrected a few things, overall it made perfect sense. 面白かった話だと思います!前は雛祭りのことはぜんぜん聞かなかったんです。
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