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Little Happiness I Found (ちょっとした幸せ)

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Kyoko's latest journal entries Aug 12th 2010 09:22

I’ve almost packed everything to move in a week, but I feel a bit messed up. Maybe I’m nervous to think that there is something I forget to do. I have four days off for the rest on my vacation. I am not willing to do anything to do for pleasure. ^^;

The other day, I checked the new office and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagel at Kamakura on the way home. The store sells many kinds of bagel. I bought 12 pieces and bit one in Shinkan-sen. The bagel was sweetish and softer than usual ones. I became happy a little because I saw 12 bagels look like angle halo. Hahaha, I'm becoming too sentimental. ^^

Ciao.
Aug 12th 2010 09:29 雅各
  • English
  • German, Mandarin

  • Little Happiness I Found (ちょっとした幸せ)
  • I found a little happiness (ちょっとした幸せ)
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  • I’ve almost packed everything to move in a week, but I feel a bit messed up.
  • I’ve almost packed everything to move in a week's time, but I feel a bit messed up. (A week or a week's time depends on your meaning... if it took you a week to do it, it's "a week", if you will move after one week has transpired from now, it's "a week's time".)
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  • Maybe I’m nervous to think that there is something I forget to do.
  • Maybe I’m nervous to think that there is something I will forget to do.
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  • I am not willing to do anything to do for pleasure.
  • I am not willing to do anything to do for pleasure.
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  • The other day, I checked the new office and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagel at Kamakura on the way home.
  • The other day, I checked by our/my new office and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagels at Kamakura on the way home.
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  • The store sells many kinds of bagel.
  • The store sells many kinds of bagels.
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  • I bought 12 pieces and bit one in Shinkan-sen.
  • I bought 12 pieces and ate one in Shinkan-sen. (or "nibbled on one")
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  • The bagel was sweetish and softer than usual ones.
  • The bagel was sweeter and softer than usual ones.
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  • I became happy a little because I saw 12 bagels look like angle halo.
  • I felt quite happy because I saw that each of the 12 bagels looked like an angel's halo.
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Aug 12th 2010 09:30 Thomas
  • English
  • Japanese, Spanish

  • Maybe I’m nervous to think that there is something I forget to do.
  • Maybe I’m nervous. I keep thinking that there is something I forgot to do.
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  • I have four days off for the rest on my vacation.
  • I have four days of vacation left. OR I have four days of vacation I can use to rest.
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  • I am not willing to do anything to do for pleasure.
  • I am not willing to do just anything for pleasure.
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  • The other day, I checked the new office and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagel at Kamakura on the way home.
  • The other day, I checked the new office and found a bakery stand specializing in bagel at Kamakura on the way home.
Comment  
  • The store sells many kinds of bagel.
  • The store sells many kinds of bagels.
Comment  
  • The bagel was sweetish and softer than usual ones.
  • The bagel was sweet and softer than the usual ones.
Comment  
  • I became happy a little because I saw 12 bagels look like angle halo.
  • I became a little bit happy because I saw 12 bagels look like an angel halo.
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Aug 12th 2010 09:35 metal.carratt
  • English
  • Korean

  • Maybe I’m nervous to think that there is something I forget to do.
  • Maybe I’m nervous to thinking that there might be something I will forget to do.
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  • I have four days off for the rest on my vacation.
  • I have four days off to rest during my vacation.
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  • I am not willing to do anything to do for pleasure.
  • I am not willing to do anything to do for pleasure.--> The meaning is a bit hard to understand?
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  • The other day, I checked the new office and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagel at Kamakura on the way home.
  • The other day, I checked the location of my new office and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagels at Kamakura on the way home.
Comment  
  • The store sells many kinds of bagel.
  • The store sells many kinds of bagels.
Comment  
  • I bought 12 pieces and bit one in Shinkan-sen.
  • I bought 12 pieces and ate one in Shinkan-sen.
Comment  
  • The bagel was sweetish and softer than usual ones.
  • The bagel was sweetish and softer than usual ones.
Comment  
  • I became happy a little because I saw 12 bagels look like angle halo.
  • I was a little happy a little because when I looked at the 12 bagels they looked like angle halos.
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Aug 12th 2010 10:49 Yugao
  • English
  • Japanese

  • I bought 12 pieces and bit one in Shinkan-sen.
  • I bought 12, and took a bite of one on the Shinkansen.
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  • I became happy a little because I saw 12 bagels look like angle halo.
  • I kind of liked that the bagels looked like angel halos. (suggestion)
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  • Hahaha, I'm becoming too sentimental.
  • Hahaha, I'm getting too sentimental.
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Aug 12th 2010 11:38 Jubinell
  • Vietnamese
  • Japanese, Korean

  • I’ve almost packed everything to move in a week, but I feel a bit messed up.
  • I’ve almost packed everything ready to move in a week, but I (still) feel a bit messed up/disturbed.
Comment  
  • Maybe I’m nervous to think that there is something I forget to do.
  • Maybe I’m nervous thinking that there is something I forgot to do.
Comment  
  • I am not willing to do anything to do for pleasure.
  • I am not willing to do anything fun.
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  • The other day, I checked the new office and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagel at Kamakura on the way home.
  • The other day, I checked the new office and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagel in Kamakura on the way home.
Comment  
  • The bagel was sweetish and softer than usual ones.
  • The bagel was sweeter(OR: sweet-ish (ちょっと甘そう)?) and softer than the usual ones.
Comment  
  • I became happy a little because I saw 12 bagels look like angle halo.
  • I felt a bit happier because I saw 12 bagels that looked like angle halos.
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Aug 12th 2010 16:03

Wow, so many different types of bagels! I would buy all of them too ^^
Aug 12th 2010 16:55 Nacho
  • English
  • Japanese, Spanish

Hey what kind of company do you work at?
Aug 13th 2010 09:16 Kyoko
  • Japanese
  • English

Thank you everybody for your corrections.

>Nacho
That's high classified confidential. です。＾＾
Aug 13th 2010 11:57 jameserb
  • English
  • Japanese, Spanish

  • I’ve almost packed everything to move in a week, but I feel a bit messed up.
  • I’ve almost packed everything in preparation for my move next week, but I feel a bit messed up.
Comment  
  • Maybe I’m nervous to think that there is something I forget to do.
  • Maybe I’m nervous to think that there is something I forget to do."Perhaps I'm afraid I've forgotten something."
Comment  
  • I have four days off for the rest on my vacation.
  • I have four days off for the rest on my vacation.There are just four days remaining in my vacation.
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  • The other day, I checked the new office and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagel at Kamakura on the way home.
  • The other day, I visited the new office; on my way home and I found a bakery stand specializing in bagels in Kamakura .
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