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I got a new PEPSI !

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of token's latest journal entries Jun 24th 2009 05:36 food strange
Suntory ( drink vendor in Japan ) releases the new PEPSI.
That flavor is Shiso.

I drank it.
I guess that is not bad, but not good :P

That taste is like a ginger ale, but it smells shiso.
hmm, I imaged that it taste is slice shiso on the tofu...orz

That is not the Coke, but it prints this at the label.

"The flavor has the refreshment".
"The shiso flavor makes coke cool".

If you know a strange coke, please tell me it.

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Jun 24th 2009 05:59 Nostrum
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  • Suntory ( drink vendor in Japan ) releases the new PEPSI.
  • Suntory (a drink vendor in Japan) (recently) released the new PEPSI. (Instead of "the new Pepsi" you could say "a new type of Pepsi")
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  • I guess that is not bad, but not good :P
  • I guess it's not bad, but it's not good :P
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  • That taste is like a ginger ale, but it smells shiso.
  • That taste is like a ginger ale, but it smells like shiso. (Or you could say "it tastes like ginger ale, but smells like shiso")
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  • hmm, I imaged that it taste is slice shiso on the tofu...
  • hmm, I imagined that it tasted like sliced shiso on tofu...
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  • That is not the Coke, but it prints this at the label.
  • That is not the Coke, but it had this at the label. (Or "It wasn't really Coke, but that's what it said on the label")
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  • "The flavor has the refreshment".
  • "The flavor has the refreshment". (haha I don't understand this one. Maybe you could say "It has a refreshing taste")
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  • "The shiso flavor makes coke cool".
  • "The shiso flavor makes the coke cool".
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  • If you know a strange coke, please tell me it.
  • If you know a strange coke, please tell me about it.
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I don't know what shiso is to be honest :P But that's probably just me. I looked it up on wikipedia, I guess it's like mint?

That sounds pretty interesting... I remember a few years ago there was a "Pepsi Blue" or something that tasted like blueberry maybe? I didn't like it very much.

Anyways, good job with your English.
Jun 24th 2009 06:12

  • Suntory ( drink vendor in Japan ) releases the new PEPSI.
  • Suntory, a drink vendor in Japan, released a new PEPSI product. The commas instead of parenthesis form a nonrestrictive clause. Also, the entire PEPSI company didn't change, just a new flavor, which is why "product" was added.
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  • That flavor is Shiso.
  • The new flavor is Shiso. This is just being more descriptive.
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  • I drank it.
  • I drank it.
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  • I guess that is not bad, but not good :P
  • I drank it, and I guess it is not bad, but not the best:P Two sentences were combined with a comma. Also, the last two words were modified to show indifference.
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  • That taste is like a ginger ale, but it smells shiso.
  • It tastes like ginger ale, but it smells like shiso. Just a few word corrections.
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  • hmm, I imaged that it taste is slice shiso on the tofu...
  • Hmm, I imagined that it would taste like slice shiso on tofu... A change to past tense.
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  • That is not the Coke, but it prints this at the label.
  • It is not Coke, but it is printed on the label. I think this is what you mean.
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  • "The flavor has the refreshment".
  • "The flavor has the refreshment". The flavor is refreshing.
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  • If you know a strange coke, please tell me it.
  • If you know of a strange coke, please let me know. Just a little more natural.
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All in all, your entry was great and I understood it very well. I would like to try the drink now!
Jun 24th 2009 06:14 token
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  • English, Mandarin

thank you.

Yes, shiso is like mint, it's tastes sour a little and it's tastes like grass :D
Jun 24th 2009 06:34 token
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  • English, Mandarin

Thank you Dylan.

Perhaps, the spicy chicken is more delicious than pizza.
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