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I bought a ancient lighter.

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This ancient lighter is poor specs that have one flint and a rasp.
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At first, you open the ignition window that shapes circle.
A cigarette insert into this ignition window.
Next, you raise the pedal on right hand side and rotate it.
You inhale air until ignite a cigarette.
Of course , you rotate pedal until ignite a cigarette.
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see also : http://item.rakuten.co.jp/kituengu/pg434543/
price : 2,700yen

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review:
This lighter is very simple.
Perhaps, it can ignite a cigarette in the strong wind.
(it can ignite a cigarette "during" the strong wind ?? )

But this flint is too soft.
It's easy to mess the rasp.

This product contains one small cleaning brush.
It's tiresome to do maintenance of this lighter.

とほほ。
Jul 21st 2009 12:12 gendough

  • I bought a ancient lighter.
  • I Bought an Ancient Lighter.
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  • This ancient lighter is poor specs that have one flint and a rasp.
  • It's a primitive spark lighter that uses flint and a rasp.
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  • -----
  • Here's how to use it:
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  • At first, you open the ignition window that shapes circle.
  • [Combine with the following sentence.] First, open the circular ignition window and insert a cigarette.
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  • A cigarette insert into this ignition window.
  • A cigarette insert into this ignition window.
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  • Next, you raise the pedal on right hand side and rotate it.
  • Next, raise and rotate the pedal on the right-hand side.
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  • You inhale air until ignite a cigarette.
  • [Combine with the following.] While continuing to rotate the pedal, inhale air through the cigarette until it ignites.
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  • Of course , you rotate pedal until ignite a cigarette.
  • Of course , you rotate pedal until ignite a cigarette.
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  • see also : http://item.rakuten.co.jp/kituengu/pg434543/
  • See also: http://item.rakuten.co.jp/kituengu/pg434543/
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  • price : 2,700yen
  • Price: 2,700yen
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  • review:
  • Review:
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  • Perhaps, it can ignite a cigarette in the strong wind.
  • It might ignite a cigarette in a strong wind. [You're talking about any strong wind, so use "a" instead of "the."]
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  • (it can ignite a cigarette "during" the strong wind ??
  • (it can ignite a cigarette "during" the strong wind ?? ["In" is better than "during."]
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  • But this flint is too soft.
  • [Combine.] But the flint is too soft, and the rasp is easily messed up.
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  • It's easy to mess the rasp.
  • It's easy to mess the rasp.
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  • This product contains one small cleaning brush.
  • This product includes a small cleaning brush. ["Contains" would be more appropriate if the lighter had a compartment or such for storing the brush.]
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  • It's tiresome to do maintenance of this lighter.
  • It's tiresome to do maintenance of maintain this lighter.
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What a unique lighter! I thought my Zippo was cool, but this takes "classy" a step further.
Jul 21st 2009 12:40 token

> gendough
Thank your corrections.

In other product have a flint and a rope.
This rope don't looks like burnable but I have no idea..
http://item.rakuten.co.jp/kituengu/c/0000000212/

# for cigar ? or for fire cracker ? :D
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