A great octopus, and Takoyaki
The world cup 2010 has finished.
→The World Cup 2010 has finished.
It was broadcasted too late to watch in Japan.
It was a very woolly tournament.
→I wanted to write "a lot of unexpected things happend" as woolly.
I have heard a news about an octopus, which has forecasted the winner perfectly.
→I had heard a news about an octopus, which had forecasted the winner perfectly.
By the way, takoyaki is one of the most popular food in Japan.
→By the way, takoyaki is one of the most popular foods in Japan.
Takoyaki shapes like a ball, and made from flour.
→Takoyaki is shaped like a ball, and made from flour.
There is a piece of octopus. We eat takoyaki with putting source on it.
→We eat takoyaki by putting sauce on it.
It should be eaten while it is very hot. Sometimes I burn the inside of my mouth, but I love takoyaki.
In the west side of Japan, there is Akashiyaki, which looks like takoyaki, but it usually in a soup.
→On the western side of Japan, there is akashiyaki, which looks like takoyaki, but it is usually in a soup.
→The World Cup 2010 has finished.
It was broadcasted too late to watch in Japan.
It was a very woolly tournament.
→I wanted to write "a lot of unexpected things happend" as woolly.
I have heard a news about an octopus, which has forecasted the winner perfectly.
→I had heard a news about an octopus, which had forecasted the winner perfectly.
By the way, takoyaki is one of the most popular food in Japan.
→By the way, takoyaki is one of the most popular foods in Japan.
Takoyaki shapes like a ball, and made from flour.
→Takoyaki is shaped like a ball, and made from flour.
There is a piece of octopus. We eat takoyaki with putting source on it.
→We eat takoyaki by putting sauce on it.
It should be eaten while it is very hot. Sometimes I burn the inside of my mouth, but I love takoyaki.
In the west side of Japan, there is Akashiyaki, which looks like takoyaki, but it usually in a soup.
→On the western side of Japan, there is akashiyaki, which looks like takoyaki, but it is usually in a soup.
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The World Cup 2010 has finished.
It was a very woolly tournament. [I do not believe you used this word correctly - woolly is something that is made of wool. Perhaps you mean to use the word "wholly", which means "thoroughly". In that case, for an example, you can say "The game was wholly entertaining".]
I had heard a news about an octopus, which had forecasted the winner perfectly.
By the way, takoyaki is one of the most popular foods in Japan.
Takoyaki isshaped like a ball and made from flour.
We eat takoyaki withbyputting sauce on it.
On the western side of Japan, there is akashiyaki, which looks like takoyaki, but it isusually in a soup.
By the way, takoyaki sounds good. I have never tried it, but now I will when I go to Little Tokyo in Los Angeles. I like to eat spicy dried squid.
Good text! :)
I wanted to write that many unexpected things, for example Italia, everybody didn't expect their lose, couldn't win the elimination, happened by using "woolly".
I found the word "woolly" from a dictionary though, it doesn't make sense for you.
Should've I used "destabilizing"?
>> Thank you for your _correction_.
I looked up the word 'woolly' in the dictionary again and I found that it has another meaning [woolly: marked by boisterous roughness or lack of order or restraint], but not many people use the word like this anymore. Perhaps 'destabilizing' is a better word.