I have caught a cold.

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4 days have passed since I arrived the Philippines.
It seems that I have caught a cold in the plance, because the air conditioner were too cold.
So today I didn't go to the lessons and lie on the bed.

I went to a big mall in CEBU, called "Ayala mall" 2 days ago.
I was surprised that, It was extremly big, huge.
I bought some beers (I love beer!) and water melon and mangos there.
It was only cost less than $10.

Mangos are alos very cheap than Japan.
You can buy more than 10 mangos in the Philippins with the cost of 1 mango in Japan.


[日本語]
フィリピンに来てから4日が経ちました。
飛行機の中が寒すぎて風邪を引いたようです。
なので、今日はレッスンには行かずにベッドで横になってます。

そういえば2日前にセブの大きなショッピングモールの「アヤラモール」というところに行ったんですが、
広すぎてビックリしました。
そこでビールとスイカとマンゴーを買いました。(ビール大好きです。)
全部で$10もしませんでした。

マンゴーもめっちゃ安くて、日本の1個あたりのお金でこちらでは10個以上買えます。







Nov 10th 2011 15:18 Andy

  • 4 days have passed since I arrived the Philippines.
  • 4 days have passed since I arrived in the Philippines.

 

  • It seems that I have caught a cold in the plance, because the air conditioner were too cold.
  • It seems that I have caught a cold in the plane, because the air conditioner was too cold.

 

  • So today I didn't go to the lessons and lie on the bed.
  • So today I didn't go to the lessons and laid in the bed.

 

  • I was surprised that, It was extremly big, huge.
  • I was surprised that, It was extremely big, huge. (you can use huge too, but use only 1 word)

 

  • I bought some beers (I love beer!) and water melon and mangos there.
  • I bought some beers (I love beer!) and water melon and mangoes there.

 

  • It was only cost less than $10.
  • It was only cost less than $10. (It was less than $10 is also ok)

 

  • Mangos are alos very cheap than Japan.
  • Mangoes are also much cheaper than in Japan.

 

  • You can buy more than 10 mangos in the Philippins with the cost of 1 mango in Japan.
  • You can buy more than 10 mangoes in the Philippines for the cost of 1 mango in Japan.

 
Yes, the cost of fruit in Japan is very expensive. I was so shocked when I got here.
Nov 10th 2011 15:26 yangyang
Andy

Thank you for your corrections.
Yeah, many things are very expensive in Japan.
Nov 10th 2011 19:21 Shizukana

  • I have caught a cold.
  • I Have Caught a Cold.Comment: As this is the title, initial capital letters should be used: http://www.say-it-in-english.com/BasicEnglish8.html

 

  • 4 days have passed since I arrived the Philippines.
  • 4(Four) days have passed since I arrived at the Philippines.Comment: Using '4' is okay in casual writing, but it is best to spell out the number.

 

  • It seems that I have caught a cold in the plance, because the air conditioner were too cold.
  • I seems that I to have caught a cold on in the plane, because the air conditioning was too cold.Comment: You may be interested in this -> http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/grammar/learnit/learnitv353.shtml

 

  • So today I didn't go to the lessons and lie on the bed.
  • So today I didn't go for to the lessons and lie on the but laid/stayed in bed.

 

  • I went to a big mall in CEBU, called "Ayala mall" 2 days ago.
  • I went to a big mall in Cebu, called "Ayala Mall", (two)2 days ago.Comment: Names (e.g. Cebu, Japan, Ayala Mall, Kyoto) should be in initial capital letters.

 

  • I was surprised that, It was extremly big, huge.
  • I was surprised that it was extremely big (or huge).

 

  • I bought some beers (I love beer!) and water melon and mangos there.
  • I bought some beers (I love beer!), and water melon and mangoes there.Comment: plural of beer is still beer, unless it is quantified by a number, e.g. I will have two beers, please.

 

  • It was only cost less than $10.
  • It was only cost less than $10.Comment: You can also use "under" instead of "less than". Another, perhaps more natural way to say this is: I paid under $10 for the lot.

 

  • Mangos are alos very cheap than Japan.
  • Mangoes are also very much cheaper than in Japan.

 
心ないを残念に思います。I am so sorry for being inconsiderate. m(_ _)m

十分な休息をとって、すぐに回復してください。Please have a good rest and get well soon.
Nov 20th 2011 21:38 banira

フィリピン留学ってgood ideaですね。
風邪大丈夫ですか?
がんばってください!
Nov 20th 2011 22:17 yangyang
有難うございます、昨日やっと治りました!

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