Full days in the Philippines.

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of yangyang's latest journal entries Nov 27th 2011 23:43

Oops!
One week has already passed since I wrote the last diary though I wrote that I will write English diary every day.

By the way, the last week were very fulling.
I attend the English lesson from morning to 4:00 pm, then I go to a coffee shop with my laptop to work.
The place is very good for me to concentrate on my work.
After the battery got empty I go to a hotel's lounge where WiFi and plug are available and work until it closed.

It is very tired to have English lesson and do my work together, but very fulling.

I am writing this diary in the hotel's lounge during the break of my work.


The picture is the place I usually do my work.
Nov 28th 2011 00:38 Sona

  • One week has already passed since I wrote the last diary though I wrote that I will write English diary every day.
  • One week has already passed since I wrote the last diary though I wrote that I will would write an English diary every day.

 

  • By the way, the last week were very fulling.
  • By the way, the last week were was very fulling buzy.

 

  • I attend the English lesson from morning to 4:00 pm, then I go to a coffee shop with my laptop to work.
  • I attend the English lesson classes from morning to 4:00 pm, then I go went to a coffee shop with my laptop to do some work.

 

  • The place is very good for me to concentrate on my work.
  • The place is very good It is a good place for me to concentrate on my work.

 

  • After the battery got empty I go to a hotel's lounge where WiFi and plug are available and work until it closed.
  • After the battery got empty I go When the battery ran out, I went to a hotel's lounge where WiFi and plug points are available and I worked until it closed.

 

  • It is very tired to have English lesson and do my work together, but very fulling.
  • It is very tireding to have English lesson and do my work together, but very fulfilling.

 

  • I am writing this diary in the hotel's lounge during the break of my work.
  • I am writing this diary in the hotel's lounge during the break of from my work.

 

  • The picture is the place I usually do my work.
  • The picture (cinema?...really) is the place I usually do my work.

 
The last sentence doesn't make sense. Where do normally go to work?
Nov 28th 2011 00:45 yangyang
Thank you for your corrections.
I'm sorry for the last sentence, I should explain more detail.
It is a mall and I worked in a coffee shop of the mall.
Nov 28th 2011 08:49 さい
Thank you for running this site Lang-8.
いつもLang-8にお世話になっております。
Are you staying in Philippine now?
Yangyangさんは、今、フィリピンにいらしゃるのですね(?)。


Nov 28th 2011 19:03 yangyang
はい、フィリピンで英語勉強してます!
Nov 28th 2011 19:48 Shizukana

  • Full days in the Philippines.
  • Fulfilling Days in the Philippines.Comment: As this is the title, all words (except for a, an, and, of, to, the, etc. - unless they are the at the beginning of the sentence) must have initial capital letters. タイトル中の単語にはそれぞれ期首資本文字があるに違いありません。例外:a, an, and, of, to, the, etc. (それらが文を始める場合以外は)。

 

  • One week has already passed since I wrote the last diary though I wrote that I will write English diary every day.
  • One week has already passed since I wrote the/my last diary entry, even though I wrote that I will write an English diary entry every day.

 

  • By the way, the last week were very fulling.
  • By the way, the last week was very fulfilling (満足感).

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • I attend the English lesson from morning to 4:00 pm, then I go to a coffee shop with my laptop to work.
  • I attend the English lessons from morning until 4:00 pm, then I visit a coffee shop to do my work on my laptop.Comment: I feel that using "lessons" is good here, considering they are all one-on-one sessions. Classes refer to a group of students coming together to study under a teacher: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/class.

 

  • The place is very good for me to concentrate on my work.
  • This place is very good for making me to concentrate on my work.

 

  • After the battery got empty I go to a hotel's lounge where WiFi and plug are available and work until it closed.
  • After the battery runs out, I visit a hotel lounge where WiFi and power points are available and continue working there until it closes.Comment: I am not sure if you meant "power recharge points" (パワー充電ポイント) when you wrote "plug".

 

  • It is very tired to have English lesson and do my work together, but very fulling.
  • It is very tiring to take English lessons and do my work all in the same day, but it is also very fulfilling.Suggestion: Although it is very tiring to juggle (ジャッグル) English lessons with my work, it is also very fulfilling.

 

  • I am writing this diary in the hotel's lounge during the break of my work.
  • I am writing this diary entry in the hotel lounge during a break from my work.

 

  • The picture is the place I usually do my work.
  • The picture is of the place where I usually do my work.

 
Good evening, Yangyang!

お疲れ様でした。

You are always a source of strength and inspiration.

Thank you for always working so hard to make Lang-8 better when it is already very good.

Nov 28th 2011 20:20 yangyang
Thank you very much!
I will work harder to improve Lang-8.
Nov 28th 2011 20:33 Shizukana
You are most welcome.

While working hard, please also do not forget to take care of yourself.

くれぐれもお体をお大事に。 m(_ _)m
Nov 28th 2011 22:42 yangyang
Thank you : )
Nov 28th 2011 22:54 Shizukana
I attend the English lessons from morning until 4:00 pm, then I visit a coffee shop to do my work on my laptop.Comment: I feel that using "lessons" is good here, considering they are all one-on-one sessions. Classes refer to a group of students coming together to study under a teacher: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/class.
You are most welcome. :)

Please delete (抹消) "the" from "I attend THE English lessons...". The sentence should read as follows:

"I attend English lessons from morning until 4:00 pm, then I visit a coffee shop to do my work on my laptop."

Sorry I missed it earlier.

(。・ω・。)ノおやすみなしゃい
Mar 20th 2012 05:40
By the way, the last week was very fulfilling (満足感).
This is correct.
Mar 22nd 2012 20:01 Shizukana
Thank you.

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